OK - i need a hand again in copywriting ;)
We are going to send all Minti members a special Minti Virtual Gift.... a pair of "Muggies"... ie: Minti Ugg Boots
A short email will be sent to all subscribed members asking them to log in and accept their gift.
We need better wording for the email though. So please have a go at some new wording... and if we end up using your wording (or close to it) i will send you m$5000 (USD$10) to your Minti account. Just post your entry in the comments below.
Here is what we have so far...
NOTE: We prefer the opening sentence to v2 below... but don't like the reference to "our" parenting community... as it really is your community.
Gift Tag Copy v2
We know it’s not Christmas but gift giving is so much fun….
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Copy v2
Hello Nova,
Have you seen the gift we sent you yet? Waiting for you is the ultimate in minti accessories – a pair of ‘Muggies’ - go check them out.
We really just want to say thanks for all your hard work on minti. Your friendship and valuable advice has warmed our hearts.
Please log-in to accept our gift to you – it will warm your toes!
Thanks Again!
Rachel, Matt and Clay
Subject Line v1
With Thanks from Matt, Clay and Rachel….
Copy v1
Lady Nova,
We would like to offer you a little gift as a token of our appreciation for all your efforts on minti.
It is great to have your continued support and valuable advice within our parenting community, honestly your friendship has warmed our hearts!
As thanks, please accept our gift to you – it will warm your toes!
Waiting in your member area is the ultimate in minti accessories – a pair of ‘Muggies’- go check them out!
Thanks,
Matt, Clay and Rachel