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Nov
2007

First Part of My Story

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Well, the computers finally fixed, so here is a little part of my book......

The night air was crisp and sharp as he took deep short shallow breathes.  The plan had seemed so simple in the beginning, but as he struggled to suck in the damp, freezing air, his lungs began to hurt.  He had forgotten to account for the cold December weather.  The evening started out just as he had organized.  Everyone piled into the old beat up 1965 yellow Ford Galaxy, the lining from the roof resting on top of everyone’s heads as they slowly drove to the exact spot that they knew would be hidden from view.  They turned off the lights as they approached their destination.  The anticipation and excitement inside the car was overtaking the silence that they needed to have on this particular night. One by one they piled out of the car, trying to crawl to the small cramped covering that would serve as their shelter for the next three hours.  Huddled together behind the thick, prickly bushes, breathe billowing up in a cloud of smoke due to the frosty weather.  Sudden movement and a quick light flashed across the forest.  He sucked in his breathe, it was really happening! A quick flash of regret and fear flashed through his mind.    

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Peita79
November 2007 | Peita79
Re: First Part of My Story
Great first part, very catching. Can we see the rest?


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      LisaPetrarca
November 2007 | LisaPetrarca
Re: First Part of My Story

That's the thing, I'm writing it right now so I'm just putting some of it up as I go.......hoping that you guys will encourage me to keep writing,  I tend to get side tracked and not finish things.  So if I know everyone's expecting me to post portions of it each week, I think it will force me to finish it.....Thanks for the interest!

I'll put more up next week.  



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natelz1
November 2007 | natelz1
Re: First Part of My Story
Cant wait for it to come out!!


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      LisaPetrarca
November 2007 | LisaPetrarca
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Thanks, Nat, I'll post more next week!!!


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