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A Day's Work

Bex17 by Bex17 Speaking(March 2008) (rank 500+)

 

This is great advice... in a different way.

Today I left  some dishes dirtly

the bed got made around two thirty

the nappies soaked a little longer

their odour grew a little stronger

the crumbs I

spilled the day before

were staring at me from the floor

the dirt streaks on those window panes

will still be there next time it rains

for shame 'oh lazy thing'  you say

and just what did you do today.

I nursed a baby while he slept

I held a toddler while he wept

I played a game of hide and seek

I pushed a swing, I sang a song

I taught a child whats right from wrong

what did i do this whole day  through

not much that shows I guess its true

unless you think what I've just done

might be important to someone

with big blue eyes and soft blond hair

if thats true I've done my share.

(from Allansford Playgroup's welcome kit to new framilies)

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2BeautifulGirls
5.00 (Excellent) | April 2008 | 2BeautifulGirls
Re: A Day's Work

I love that, it is certainly true but would we have it any other way.  I know I wouldn't, I prefer spending time with my girls before all the household stuff.



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mum2b84
5.00 (Excellent) | March 2008 | mum2b84
Re: A Day's Work

YOU WILL NOT BELIEVE IT!!!!! I have been looking for this poem for YEARS after I was read it and given a copy at my mothers group which I then proceded to loose! THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU!



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cazza
March 2008 | cazza
Re: A Day's Work

what a special advice that was,, and so true

xxxx cazza



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curiousnamow
March 2008 | curiousnamow
Re: A Day's Work

If only we could convice our "society brain" to live the life of the "child brain"



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